Here is my first draft for my music magazine contents page on the left and my final contents page on the right. As you can see, there is a huge difference in terms of style, organization and quality. My first draft appears extremely bland and dull, there is not much going on and it doesn't work well to catch the readers attention. I decided to split the contents information into sections, for example 'regulars' and 'interviews' as this was more structured and appeared more tidy. I added more images and improved on the title, making it look bold and attractive so it governs the page.